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finally, this took time. i hopethe colors looksalright, the replacement screen has a gray tone over everything >:C

anyway this is Chai Xianghua from soul calibur series in her 2p outfit from SCIV, cause her 1p outfit is sooooo ugly
the background is her stage from Soul Calibur ("Emperor's Garden"). my friend suggested Xiwei Ruins (her stage from SCII) but it was to much details for me, bah I hate drawing backgrounds.

anyway,ive requested critiqueon this one, mainly sincei want a good friend of mine to critizice but everyone arewelcome to do as well :)

Xianghua (c) Namco Bandai, project soul.
Art (c) me



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if you people like Xianghua feel free to join the group :iconchaixianghua:
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:iconbaioretto-majo:
I must say it's jus amazing drawing!
Background is so detalied , i don't know when I should look first!
I like how you do mountains - they are done in soft way.
I also like your shading , especially on the outfit - it looks fantastic congratulations!
Anyway , you should work with you anatomy (Espacially in the face , I see that you have problem with placed each elements)
Idea is nice but i believe you can made something better , maybe you should try to draw more difficult place?

What Can I say more - This drawing is a piece of great , great job you should draw more often things like this :)
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:iconphillydelphy:
hamams~ :3
I will critic the negative first so that when the positive appears you will feel better~

Negative: The first thing that ive seen a little bit unstable in here is the anatomy. Im very meticulous with anatomy. You shold improve with the facial features (make the eyes go a little bit closer together since the space between the eyes is only an inch wide) and also a bit more improvement with the nose. You could also do a little bit more practice on those hands.
As you have said the background needs a bit more improvement probably do a fading scene since its a bit far away from her but since you have said that backgrounds are hard to draw...I can relate with that

As for the coloring you just need a bit more shadows in it.

Positive: Among all of your deviations this one tops. Ive seen a really great improvement in your work. The color combination in her dress is PERFECT. I love how you could really balance colors well. Pink and Blue and Yellow do really go well together. The highlights gives that silk-kind-of effect which i do love. The anatomy of the body is in really good proportion. I do love love her hair very much. I love the design it really goes well in SC series. It inspires me again to draw another SC artwork. I appreciate all those effort you've done and the posing is just simply hers. You can see her inner attitude just by looking at her expression.

Well done my dear~ youve done a great masterpiece. Im hoping for more artworks and i believe that you could do better! Keep up the good work and dont give up!
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*eCC-u Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist
Very nice art work here. :D
I really like the coloring. :)
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:iconmanga-denise:
Thank you so much! :hug: Im always so happy to know people like my art ^^
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*eCC-u Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist
You're welcome! :hug:
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Mood: Amazed ~syahilla Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So...beautiful..:heart:
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~syahilla Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome;)
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:icondarkwings13:
Very nice. The background looks fantastic and the rendering of the shades on her outfit is so well done. It looks like I'm looking at real silk! That is the crowning part of this picture for I rarely see such well colored fabrics. The only thing I would suggest is more light on her No Name (sword) since it looks alittle dull on the blade. Her nose is alittle too upturned and in conjunction with her lips, it should be alittle lower on the face. But other than that, this is a very beautiful picture (>^.^)
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:iconmanga-denise:
OMG I think I just received my very first critique C:
Thank you for all your kind and helping words
I think, since I still got the file I might fix the sword and youre right about her nose, it is a bit weird I'll try fix it as well. again thank you so much for this comment, It made my day! :hug:
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:icondarkwings13:
No problem, I'm glad to have helped! =3
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